# Novel I — First Draft: The Dialogue Draft
In ["Novel I — First Draft: Sprint Writing"](/harrys-desk/novel-i-first-draft-sprint-writing) I argued that a first draft is a search, not a performance. The goal is not elegance. The goal is completion. Today I want to offer one of the most reliable techniques I know for preserving that search and finishing it quickly: write the first draft as dialogue first, then expand outward. I call it the dialogue draft, and it is the closest thing I have found to a shortcut that does not cheat.
The idea is simple and old. Drama has always understood that the quickest way to discover a scene is to put two people in a room and let them talk. Dialogue reveals desire, conflict, history, and power faster than any amount of narration. A dialogue draft takes advantage of this by writing every scene as a script first: character names, speech, and the barest stage directions. No description, no interiority, no weather, no metaphors. Just voices in motion. Once the voices find the truth of the scene, you dress them in prose.
AI is an unusually good partner for this method, but it is also a risky one. The model can generate dialogue fluently, which means it can generate dialogue that sounds plausible without meaning anything. The writer's job is to keep the dialogue honest: every line must advance the scene, reveal character, or complicate the situation. The model can keep the voices moving; you must decide whether what they say matters.
Why Dialogue First?
Most first drafts stall because the writer is trying to do too many things at once. You are inventing plot, rendering setting, managing point of view, choosing metaphors, and calibrating tone, all while trying to discover what the scene is actually about. The cognitive load is enormous. When the load gets too high, you stop.
Dialogue removes most of that load. Setting is reduced to a line. Interiority is postponed. Metaphor is not required. You are left with the one thing that drives fiction forward: a person who wants something speaking to someone who can help or hinder them. If the exchange is alive, the scene is alive. If the exchange is dead, no amount of beautiful prose will save it.
There is another reason dialogue works as a first draft. Dialogue is naturally modular. You can write a single exchange in ten minutes. You can move an exchange to a different location without rewriting everything around it. You can cut a flat exchange and try a different one. The draft becomes a collection of movable parts, which makes revision far less frightening. A novel in prose feels like a wall; a novel in dialogue feels like a pile of stones.
What a Dialogue Draft Looks Like
A dialogue draft does not look like a finished book. It looks like a screenplay with less formatting. Here is a fragment from an imaginary novel:
> CLARA: You sold the clock without telling me. > > MARION: It stopped working three years ago. > > CLARA: That is not the point. > > MARION: Then what is the point? > > CLARA: The point is you decided without me. > > MARION: Someone had to.
That is the entire scene in the dialogue draft. There is no mention of the shop, the afternoon light, the dust on the counter, the way Marion holds her teacup. All of that comes later. What matters first is the conflict: one person accuses, the other defends, and both reveal something about how they see the past.
The discipline is to resist expansion while you are in dialogue mode. Do not describe the room. Do not explain the backstory. Do not polish a good line. If you think of a beautiful metaphor, write it in a bracketed note and keep going. The dialogue draft is a skeleton. You cannot afford to stop and admire the marrow.
The Sprint-Draft Marriage
The dialogue draft works best when combined with the sprint mindset from Monday's article. A sprint asks you to cover distance before you judge the landscape. The dialogue draft gives you the lightest possible vehicle for that distance. You are not building a cathedral. You are laying down tracks.
My usual rhythm is this: in the morning, I choose the scene I want to write. I spend five minutes reminding myself of the central question of that scene: what does the protagonist want here, and who opposes it? Then I write the scene as pure dialogue. I do not stop for research. I do not stop for better words. I write until the scene reaches a change: someone learns something, decides something, or loses something. Then I move to the next scene.
At the end of a session, I may have three or four scenes that look like rough theater. The prose is not there, but the architecture of feeling is. I can read through the dialogue draft in half an hour and know whether the chapter is working. If it is not working, I can see exactly where it fails. That is the gift of the method: clarity without polish.
AI as a Dialogue Partner
Here is where the model earns its place. During a dialogue draft, I use AI in three specific ways.
First, continuation. When I do not know what a character would say next, I write the last line and ask the model to propose three possible replies. I almost never use the first one. The first reply is usually the obvious reply, and obvious replies make flat scenes. I look at the second and third options, or I use the bad options to clarify what I actually want the character to say. The model is not writing the scene. It is generating possibilities so that my own choice becomes sharper.
Second, voice calibration. If I have two characters in conversation and they start sounding alike, I feed the model a few lines from earlier in the draft and ask it to identify the difference between the two voices. Sometimes the model gives me a mechanical answer about vocabulary or sentence length. Sometimes it catches something I missed, like the fact that one character speaks in accusations while the other speaks in deflections. I use whatever insight I get to rewrite the next exchange.
Third, contradiction checking. In a dialogue draft, characters reveal information constantly. Some of it I planned. Some of it I discovered. The model can read the accumulating draft and flag inconsistencies: a character claims to know something on page ten that she only learned on page forty, or a father refers to a sister who was established as an only child. These catches are invaluable because the dialogue draft is moving fast and memory is unreliable.
The Danger of Fluent Nothing
The biggest risk in an AI-assisted dialogue draft is that the model will give you dialogue that sounds like dialogue without doing the work of dialogue. Two characters can exchange pleasant, coherent sentences for pages and never once test each other. That is not a scene. That is a transcript of a polite afternoon.
Good dialogue is pressure under speech. Every line should make the situation harder for someone. A question should corner. An answer should withhold. A confession should cost something. If the model's proposed lines do not increase pressure, reject them. I sometimes tell the model explicitly: "Give me three replies that make Clara's position more difficult." The constraint forces the model away from filler.
Another warning: the model tends to make characters too articulate. People in novels do not always say what they mean. They lie, deflect, stammer, talk about one thing to avoid another. If the dialogue draft sounds like a series of clear thesis statements, it is probably dead. Push the model for subtext. Ask for lines that say the opposite of what the character feels. Ask for interruptions, unfinished sentences, and replies that miss the point.
Expanding from Dialogue to Prose
Once the dialogue draft is complete, or once a single scene is complete, you begin the expansion pass. This is where prose happens, but it happens with a foundation. You already know what the scene is about. Now you decide how the reader should experience it.
I expand in layers. The first layer is framing: where are they, what are they doing, what does the reader need to see? The second layer is interiority: what does each character think but not say? The third layer is rhythm: how long should the silences be, where should the pace tighten, where should it breathe? The fourth layer is language: the specific verbs, the sensory details, the metaphors that belong to this world.
AI can help here too, but the role changes. I no longer ask the model to generate the next line of dialogue. I ask it to suggest a detail that makes the setting felt, or a sentence that conveys a character's unspoken thought, or a transition that preserves tension. The model becomes a prose assistant, not a scene writer. The decisions remain mine.
A practical technique: paste the dialogue draft into the model and ask for three different ways to open the scene in prose. The model will likely give you one safe option, one overwritten option, and one surprising option. You can then write your own opening that borrows what works and rejects what does not. The dialogue draft has already done the heavy lifting of discovery. The prose pass is about rendering.
When Not to Use a Dialogue Draft
No method is universal. The dialogue draft is less useful for novels where the texture of consciousness is the whole point, or where the narrator's voice is the main pleasure. A lyric novel, a deeply interior novel, or a novel built from memory and reflection may not want to strip down to speech. In those cases, the first draft should probably stay in prose, though you can still use dialogue within it.
The dialogue draft is also less useful if your characters are alone for long stretches. A castaway novel, a travelogue, or a novel about solitude may not have enough speech to build a draft around. The method needs at least two people in conflict, or one person speaking to a world that answers back.
But for most novels, especially those driven by relationships, secrets, power, and family, the dialogue draft is a powerful first pass. It forces you to find the human engine of every scene before you worry about the upholstery.
The Integrity of the Method
The same integrity question from Monday applies here. Who is making the decisions? If you ask the model to write a whole scene of dialogue and you accept it because it is plausible, you are not using the dialogue draft. You are outsourcing the draft. The scene will sound like people talking, but it will not be your people talking about your problems.
The dialogue draft is honest only when you remain the one who chooses what matters. The model can suggest a reply; you decide whether the reply deepens the wound. The model can flag a contradiction; you decide whether the contradiction is a mistake or a revelation. The model can offer three prose openings; you write the fourth one that is actually true. Completion without decision is not authorship. It is transcription.
This is why I find the dialogue draft so clarifying. Its very bareness exposes who is doing the work. You cannot hide behind elegant prose. You cannot hide behind worldbuilding. You are left with two voices and a problem. If you can make that matter, the rest of the novel will follow.
For Next Time
On Friday we close the First Draft triad with ["Novel I — First Draft: Word Count Targets,"](/harrys-desk/novel-i-first-draft-word-count-targets) where we confront the arithmetic of finishing: how many words a novel needs, how to set targets you can sustain, and how to use word count as a servant of the story rather than its master.
Your homework until then: take one scene from your novel and write it as a pure dialogue draft. No narration, no interiority, no setting beyond a single line. Just two or more voices trying to get what they want. When you are done, read it aloud. If it sounds alive, expand one layer of prose around it. If it sounds flat, ask yourself whether the scene had enough pressure to begin with. The dialogue draft tells the truth quickly. Listen to what it says.
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*Harry Mercury, Editor in Chief* *The SMF Works Project* *Week 12, Article 2*